Beyond The Hills II by Mellifluence Perfume

Beyond The Hills II

Floyd
11/24/2020 - 12:53 PM
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Everything Shines in the Beyond of the Birches

Off the beaten paths that lead from this village, a dark mist swirls, veiling the horizon like a wondrous wall of ash. Within it lie the dark mountains of birches, they say. Beyond them then is the beyond.
I take nothing with me on my way into the fog, into the black clouds at the foot of the hills. There lies a sea of birch tar, a wooden boat, a skiff, I row through balsamic incense and reddish pearls of pistachio. The beavers cast silver streaks on the swirling wall of clouds, a few drops of clove drizzle down, two blossoms dance in the wind. 'Muhuhu!' whisper the bushes of wood and earth from the mist, and then the ethereal birch trunks appear, first as shadows, powerful and white. There stands a gnarled Indonesian, barely ankle-deep in the tar, handing me dark coffee, rather crushed beans.
Then cohorts of various kinds of bright green grasses sprout between the birches, smelling damp-earthy, sharp and ethereal, others warm and khus-bright, fresh and sylph-like. Hugo Lambert sneaks mischievously over the meadows behind the forests, collecting bourbon for Oryza Legrand. From here, the mountains are nothing but clouds, growing like blossoms over the trees, from their smoke, their blood, their ash, and the earth in the rain. I am in the beyond of the birches. Everything is illuminated. The red smoke, the shimmering tar, the dark glowing woods, the glowing grasses. Like in a trance. The whole space. Endless. Timeless. Like a dream.

(With great thanks to Bloodxclat)
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42 Comments
MarieposaMarieposa 2 years ago
A heroic journey into the beyond of the birches! I loved dreaming along. And when read aloud, it becomes almost hypnotic ;)
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TherisTheris 4 years ago
Wonderfully written!
Like a story full of images
With enthusiasm and creativity
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DelightfulDelightful 5 years ago
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Wow, what a wonderful picture in the fog, by the sea made of birch tar. Quite something special :)
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SeejungfrauSeejungfrau 5 years ago
This sea of birch tar... I have to try it. Great comment.
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SoapSoap 5 years ago
Great pictures, nicely written! Birch wood cup filled to the brim with tar and ash as a topping.
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Lucy55Lucy55 5 years ago
Wow! The way you share your enthusiasm with readers is impressive. You'll probably smile at the Russian saying: "ложка дёгтя в бочке мёда" - literally: "a spoonful of tar in a barrel of honey."
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MonsieurTestMonsieurTest 5 years ago
It's already been praised a lot here, your wonderfully smoky text.
I agree with the previous commenters; they are all right.
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ChopIslandChopIsland 5 years ago
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The best comments in this forum. Period!
Sugar-sweet and full of steam like those outrageous American music productions.
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IrisNobileIrisNobile 5 years ago
... you really feel like you're in a dream :) ...... Your relatively brief, word-fantastic scent stories are always like a little treat that one happily indulges in - and they are incredibly captivating ..... the mystical photo fits perfectly, by the way! .....
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TablaTabla 5 years ago
Sounds like it would be the only appropriate scent for an initiation...
.....wonderful comment.
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AndrulaAndrula 5 years ago
OH !! It's glowing passionately in the timeless space... may the poet be blessed with happiness :D
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NuiWhakakoreNuiWhakakore 5 years ago
That sounds like a crossing made just for you; for me, probably not so much. Great dream again!
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Brelles530Brelles530 5 years ago
Great text about a very interesting fragrance! A yellow-glowing trophy is definitely yours!
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Can777Can777 5 years ago
The text, a 10, the literal depth... inspiring!
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RunaRuna 5 years ago
Almost somehow like on the way to Avalon? ... until the Indonesian with the coffee showed up ... HL and OL joined in ... but anyway: if this were made into a movie, I would definitely watch it! :)
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ToppineToppine 5 years ago
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Wow, a perfect 10! But of course, that's the sea of birch tar you've been dreaming of. I love how you let the scent speak through your words! Great, intoxicating comment, thank you..:-))
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GoldGold 5 years ago
A sensational, poetic text.
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Medianus76Medianus76 5 years ago
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Your psychedelic journey into the depths beyond the birches leads to olfactory enlightenment and thus to the fundamental grounding of the self. Colossal comment!
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PinkdawnPinkdawn 5 years ago
Rated a 10? It must really be a wonderful scent. The composition sounds interesting too. However, this perfume is supposedly no longer in production. But even if it were, it would probably be hard to find around here.
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PonticusPonticus 5 years ago
It’s probably due to the type of perfumes. Your last scents were very similar to me, so the comments seem the same as well. But you’re right, if it works, it’s good. And when you stray from the paths, only dark mist drifts and beavers leave stripes between clove droplets. Imagination is great; I envy you for that! I’ll take the 10 as a recommendation.
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FvSpeeFvSpee 5 years ago
You don't have 10 every morning before breakfast either. In my manifestation as a grumpy Lao Tzu, I offer you a cup.
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MadameLegrasMadameLegras 5 years ago
A 10 is quite a statement - congratulations on this hit and a mystic trophy!
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Camey5000Camey5000 5 years ago
Sure, take me with you on your journey into the fog. At 10.
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LeloupLeloup 5 years ago
Your comment is truly enlightening!
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MariellaMmmhMariellaMmmh 5 years ago
Thank you for this amazing comment.
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BloodxclatBloodxclat 5 years ago
I enjoyed reading this very much... and could have kept going! Wonderfully described! I'm off to collect Hugo Bourbon now.
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ExUserExUser 5 years ago
Very nicely written comment.
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GandixGandix 5 years ago
You've been drinking a lot of coffee lately.
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ErgoproxyErgoproxy 5 years ago
Goodness, the muse really kissed you with her tongue! However, I suspect there's no simple fragrance behind your beautiful words.
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ViolettViolett 5 years ago
It's smoking and steaming again, just like often in your comments. Muhuhu is back too, how nice.
I'm glad for you that you've found such a great scent beyond the birches.
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YataganYatagan 5 years ago
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What a mystical text! Awesome!
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GschpusiGschpusi 5 years ago
Muuuuhuhuhuuu.....
Laughing
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JonasP1JonasP1 5 years ago
Beautiful story!
The scent sounds very interesting as well.
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ChizzaChizza 5 years ago
Very nice comment, and the rating says it all!
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RenataRenata 5 years ago
The scent doesn't ring a bell for me, but I could have read your comment for hours, it's so beautifully written.............
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HasiHasi 5 years ago
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Woohooohooo.... I just took a peek... even "Wald" only got a 9.5... looks like you really got hit this time.
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PollitaPollita 5 years ago
That's enthusiasm! Congratulations on this wonderful find!
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SchatzSucherSchatzSucher 5 years ago
You've plunged into a sea of birch tar and are probably hopelessly lost. You rarely give out the highest score. But I guess it was meant to be. Very vividly described.
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CravacheCravache 5 years ago
At Biber, I see you're delighted and intoxicated. Very nice!
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Melisse2Melisse2 5 years ago
That sounds a bit too smoky for me. I'll go ahead and Google Muhuhu. A 10 is definitely a bold statement for the glow of the otherworldly birches.
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SalvaSalva 5 years ago
Looks like someone is completely thrilled ;) great comment!
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ParfümleinParfümlein 5 years ago
A dramatic, brilliant comment - as always about a fragrance I'm not familiar with! Wonderfully expressed - and what, please, is sylph-like? Parfumo also has an educational value for me! And now there's an education trophy for you!
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