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The feather glides softly over iris powder
Orange flashes shine citrusy
Far away the forest
Barely any trees
Close to the horizon
No more cigars
Orange flashes shine citrusy
Far away the forest
Barely any trees
Close to the horizon
No more cigars
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A bit too powdery, the iris bothers me here.
And then I'm missing the spiciness; I only perceive something woody from a distance.