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The play instinct (Part II)
This is the continuation (part II) of the review by colleague and fellow campaigner Midnights.
The reader is advised to read in the correct order !!!
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Three breakfast covers. She knows it! She photographed the chat history. The date of birth as a PIN was not a good idea. The online account was also hacked. It's a good thing that the hours at the hotel were only ever paid for in cash. It wouldn't do any good, everything always came out anyway. She asked questions. More questions. An interrogation! It went on like this for two years. At some point, he can't take it anymore. The inevitable follows. Redemption and grief. At the same time. She wanted to grow old with him. He wanted to stay young. So the end was clear from the start. Neither of them wanted to see it.
Laughing and crying, talking and silence. The other, a brief happiness. "I'm yours" she had whispered with broken eyes. Had a husband and child. Couldn't leave. He thought that was perfect! One and the other. Mentally present past. Jules still exists. At least that!
Epilogue:
They sat opposite each other. She had placed a third breakfast plate on the table. Whenever she wanted to bang her hand on the table and be angry, there was only a cold, hurt emptiness inside her. The way he sat there with shame in his eyes and a cramp in his stomach. She had seen it coming. The long evenings without him, the movements in the bank account, the hints about going to the casino, the inner turmoil that had taken hold of him. The changes in his character and his talk of cracks in his skin. She thought of Natalie Portman and "Black Swan" and wondered what movie he was in. "Jules is still around. At least that!" he repeated a few times too many. Even the thought of this liquid testosterone made her feel disgusted. He would have to sleep in the guest room from now on. She felt like showering for hours. But first she had to throw this bottle away. It was his second, and numbers had brought nothing but bad luck
The reader is advised to read in the correct order !!!
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Three breakfast covers. She knows it! She photographed the chat history. The date of birth as a PIN was not a good idea. The online account was also hacked. It's a good thing that the hours at the hotel were only ever paid for in cash. It wouldn't do any good, everything always came out anyway. She asked questions. More questions. An interrogation! It went on like this for two years. At some point, he can't take it anymore. The inevitable follows. Redemption and grief. At the same time. She wanted to grow old with him. He wanted to stay young. So the end was clear from the start. Neither of them wanted to see it.
Laughing and crying, talking and silence. The other, a brief happiness. "I'm yours" she had whispered with broken eyes. Had a husband and child. Couldn't leave. He thought that was perfect! One and the other. Mentally present past. Jules still exists. At least that!
Epilogue:
They sat opposite each other. She had placed a third breakfast plate on the table. Whenever she wanted to bang her hand on the table and be angry, there was only a cold, hurt emptiness inside her. The way he sat there with shame in his eyes and a cramp in his stomach. She had seen it coming. The long evenings without him, the movements in the bank account, the hints about going to the casino, the inner turmoil that had taken hold of him. The changes in his character and his talk of cracks in his skin. She thought of Natalie Portman and "Black Swan" and wondered what movie he was in. "Jules is still around. At least that!" he repeated a few times too many. Even the thought of this liquid testosterone made her feel disgusted. He would have to sleep in the guest room from now on. She felt like showering for hours. But first she had to throw this bottle away. It was his second, and numbers had brought nothing but bad luck
28 Comments
How nice that I don't know the fragrance yet, so I can test it without having to throw anything away. Beautifully written... π
You name it ππ
The search can sometimes drag on π
Super nice joint project, only the thing with the even numbers has to be pointed out again ;) I plead for part 3 (and go change my bank pin in a hurry)
And get a bunker bottle of Jules π
You're just a decent guy!
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You've already got a lot going in this direction..
Nice to hear from you !!!
Jules, that rotten scoundrel too!!!
Will have to talk to @Midnights sometime ππ
Congratulations on this joint project!
I have just discovered your joint project..