FrauHolle
02/25/2011 - 11:27 AM
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9Scent

1001 Reim

Yes, that's how it is with lemon,
often it just can't be without.
Whether May, June, July, August,
in Kormann's scent very self-assured,
not cute, gentle, sweet, and tender,
rather bitter and green and unspoiled,
it takes you along on its patrol
and doesn't smell much like soap at all.

A thanks to Hermi, old pipe! ;)
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7 Comments
MariellaMmmhMariellaMmmh 14 years ago
I wish I were a chicken, then I wouldn't have anything to do. I can't rhyme myself, so I'll just steal, like that Guttenberg guy!
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LouceLouce 14 years ago
Ripieno...? You don't get satire that easily, do you?
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HasiHasi 14 years ago
Cup for Lolle and for Nec
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CloverClover 14 years ago
I find it mindless and not funny at all when people get so personal and hurtful in their replies to comments.
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LouceLouce 14 years ago
*serious concentrated look* The conscious order of the form doesn't undermine the poetic modernity or the power of the stripe metaphor used here. The reference to Gernhardt is clear and as fresh as the described scent. *nod*
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HermessenzHermessenz 14 years ago
This comment is Iso E super :)
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CloverClover 14 years ago
And even if the raspberry stays away,
Lolita still likes it anyway.
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