August Erik Kormann 2008
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Stay a while...
August.
Summer is at the peak of its splendor.
In my garden, nature explodes - flowers and herbs, grasses and fruits, tomatoes and beans grow wildly together as if there were no tomorrow, pampered by countless hours of sunshine and tropical temperatures, watered and envied in the sweat of my brow.
The days still seem endless, the light long turned on before I open my eyes in the morning, life still unfolds outside the four walls even after the fox and the hare have wished each other good night hours ago.
August.
The unbearable heat of the past weeks has retreated, making way for a gentle, cool, silky warmth that softly drifts through the rooms, taking with it all that is hot, musty, stale.
The skin fits again, the breath is calmer and deeper, the nights are no longer an everlasting struggle with damp sheets, buzzing mosquitoes, and an indefinable am I awake or dreaming.
Sleeves and skirts are still short, the sun-kissed skin still revels in sunscreen, and light delicacies remain at the top of the menu.
And yet - individual withered leaves adorn the lawn in the morning, harvested grain fields rest after their labor, the melody of summer loses its exuberance, becoming quieter, more contemplative, deeper in its sound.
A premonition, a whisper, hidden signs of passing announce the end of the green, radiant endless time, dipping some late afternoons in deep green, gold-speckled light, interspersed with individual streaks of amber and ochre.
August.
Cool, green, herbal veils rise from my skin, very bright, very fresh, almost astringent - "Cologne!" flashes in my mind and disappears immediately, yielding to the image of a green, still unripe mandarin on the tree, dull shining in the moist coolness of the early morning.
I must come close to it, very close, to reach its scent, which hardly distances itself from it, surrounding it like a delicate, fragile aura.
Dark, damp foliage and twigs weave their aromas with unsweetened, tart acidity, providing protection and shade, a cool refreshment with almost unbearable restraint.
I wait for the ripening of the mandarin, for juice and sweetness, warmth and spice - yet "August" merges with my skin, becoming softer, more delicate, skinnier, without ever shedding its protective shell, showing me its golden heart, fading, withdrawing, blowing away...
Stay a while, it would be so beautiful!
Summer is at the peak of its splendor.
In my garden, nature explodes - flowers and herbs, grasses and fruits, tomatoes and beans grow wildly together as if there were no tomorrow, pampered by countless hours of sunshine and tropical temperatures, watered and envied in the sweat of my brow.
The days still seem endless, the light long turned on before I open my eyes in the morning, life still unfolds outside the four walls even after the fox and the hare have wished each other good night hours ago.
August.
The unbearable heat of the past weeks has retreated, making way for a gentle, cool, silky warmth that softly drifts through the rooms, taking with it all that is hot, musty, stale.
The skin fits again, the breath is calmer and deeper, the nights are no longer an everlasting struggle with damp sheets, buzzing mosquitoes, and an indefinable am I awake or dreaming.
Sleeves and skirts are still short, the sun-kissed skin still revels in sunscreen, and light delicacies remain at the top of the menu.
And yet - individual withered leaves adorn the lawn in the morning, harvested grain fields rest after their labor, the melody of summer loses its exuberance, becoming quieter, more contemplative, deeper in its sound.
A premonition, a whisper, hidden signs of passing announce the end of the green, radiant endless time, dipping some late afternoons in deep green, gold-speckled light, interspersed with individual streaks of amber and ochre.
August.
Cool, green, herbal veils rise from my skin, very bright, very fresh, almost astringent - "Cologne!" flashes in my mind and disappears immediately, yielding to the image of a green, still unripe mandarin on the tree, dull shining in the moist coolness of the early morning.
I must come close to it, very close, to reach its scent, which hardly distances itself from it, surrounding it like a delicate, fragile aura.
Dark, damp foliage and twigs weave their aromas with unsweetened, tart acidity, providing protection and shade, a cool refreshment with almost unbearable restraint.
I wait for the ripening of the mandarin, for juice and sweetness, warmth and spice - yet "August" merges with my skin, becoming softer, more delicate, skinnier, without ever shedding its protective shell, showing me its golden heart, fading, withdrawing, blowing away...
Stay a while, it would be so beautiful!
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16 Comments
Gaukeleya 11 years ago
Sigh... beautifully described!! The scent is great too, I'm just realizing :-P. Let's see how it *holds up for me* ;-)
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Blauemaus 12 years ago
Beautiful comment!
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Dannyboy 12 years ago
It sounds like I should give this a try despite the lily of the valley before September comes... :)
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Aura 12 years ago
So, and now a huge compliment for you and the incredibly beautiful picture that captures my favorite moments so wonderfully, amazingly well written!
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Aura 12 years ago
August, which signals the start of autumn, just like you describe it, is my absolute favorite season. It's when I was born, and I feel completely at home during that time. I couldn't connect with Kormann's September, but I will definitely try August.
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Mandelmaus 12 years ago
Such beautiful words! You express what so many think and feel, wonderfully done. I love this time. Trophy for you.
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Callas 12 years ago
Ah, yes........ (but it should get warmer again ;))
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Dobbs 12 years ago
I've rarely seen late summer captured in such beautiful words!
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0815abc 12 years ago
As always, I am deeply touched. Thank you. So much inner beauty!
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Yatagan 12 years ago
Everything's been said, now let autumn come... ;)
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Ergoproxy 12 years ago
For me, July was a bit too fresh. August seems to be more of the same.
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Jifat 12 years ago
Yes, your vivid comment sparks curiosity. This August should be experienced! :-)
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Mustang69 12 years ago
May this wonderful comment serve as motivation for August to really step it up. 30 degrees plus x, please...!!
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Aava 12 years ago
A great comment with calm, beautiful images that make me curious about what August might smell like from the bottle. Thank you!
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Hermessenz 12 years ago
..it lasts on me like crazy :)
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Hasi 12 years ago
Your way with words always takes my breath away! And you've beautifully described the late summer light that I love so much!
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