Aukai
01/09/2022 - 03:31 PM
8.5Scent 4Longevity 4Sillage 10Bottle 3Pricing
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"It was as if heaven,
had quietly kissed the earth,
so that in citrus shimmer
she must dream of iced tea"
(very freely based on Eichendorff)
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Sweetsmell75Sweetsmell75 4 years ago
I like Eichendorf ... but I'm not a fan of the scent.
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AmourageAmourage 4 years ago
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How lovely; I really like the scent and your poem too! :-))
...the quiet kisses are often the most beautiful ones ;)
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BehmiBehmi 4 years ago
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It's a shame that it seems to be short-lived?
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PinseltownPinseltown 4 years ago
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Wonderful. Joseph would have probably loved it...
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GandixGandix 4 years ago
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LaLeLu.... Sounds nice...
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FloydFloyd 4 years ago
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Great rewrite! ;-)
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JonasP1JonasP1 4 years ago
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Beautifully rephrased :-)
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SchalkerinSchalkerin 4 years ago
Kiss kiss ;)....
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SeejungfrauSeejungfrau 4 years ago
I like it too :)
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YataganYatagan 4 years ago
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Very nice.................
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SchatzSucherSchatzSucher 4 years ago
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That sounds more sunny than moony now ;-)
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UntermWertUntermWert 4 years ago
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I don't think it would be my scent, but I really like your statement!
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AukaiAukai 4 years ago
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Thank you so much, Dragonfruit! It starts with a sharp citrus note, then develops into a wonderful tea note - a beautiful, rounded iced tea composition with a hint of matcha muffin. I really enjoy the scent. Unfortunately, the magic fades away after just 1.5 hours, and it's barely noticeable anymore.
To all Eichendorff lovers: forgive me for twisting (okay, ruining!) the poem; it's one of my favorites and just popped into my mind!
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