Lakshmi's Touch Gather Perfume
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Your scruffy fur
Shines with warm clay
Silver streaks of cardamom
Sneak through roses and jasmine
Fall asleep in the herbs
Shines with warm clay
Silver streaks of cardamom
Sneak through roses and jasmine
Fall asleep in the herbs
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26 Comments
ExUser 4 years ago
Well written, but it probably wouldn't be for me.
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ArneD 4 years ago
It actually sounds really good, well, actually...
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Medianus76 4 years ago
The scruffy fur wouldn't bother me... maybe a brush would help ;)
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Andrula 4 years ago
Sneaking around makes you tired :D
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Theris 4 years ago
Well described! I don't think it will be my scent, though.
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NuiWhakakore 4 years ago
Where the **sneak** is, it’s not nice...
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Kollerl 4 years ago
The silver stripes make me think of a badger. Or are they wild boars? Hopefully not a skunk.
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Vinyldates 4 years ago
Sounds a bit wild...
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Sweetsmell75 4 years ago
hm ... sounds a bit like a stray
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Aukai 4 years ago
Hmmm. I imagined it to be a bit more romantic with Lakshmi...
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Gandix 4 years ago
What a beautiful statement you've written again.
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JonasP1 4 years ago
A very nice sleeping spot :-)
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Schalkerin 4 years ago
It might be too floral for me.
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Pinseltown 4 years ago
Very nicely described, but I think I’ll pass on this one...
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Seejungfrau 4 years ago
It didn't move me....
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Pluto 4 years ago
I have a very specific dog in mind now.....
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Licorice 4 years ago
Wishing you cozy herbal dreams! :)
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Violett 4 years ago
Maybe I'll sneak away too...
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FrauKirsche 4 years ago
...I found it okay and strange. Strange okay :))
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Bastian 4 years ago
It was quite alright....
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Delightful 4 years ago
Ha, looks like you had to give it a try after all ;D?! It has something nice, yeah...
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Ergoproxy 4 years ago
I don't think I need that.
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Polyantha 4 years ago
12 samples... I need to find a different scent :-D
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Eggi37 4 years ago
Sounds very nice, but where's the spray nozzle? :-D
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Chizza 4 years ago
The Faun and the Beast?
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Floyd 4 years ago
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Thanks to Gandix. The opening of earthy patchouli, cocoa, and slightly animalic jasmine reminds me of animalistic oud, almost furry and beautiful. Cardamom adds a bright spiciness. Unfortunately, later on, there's more rose, which feels a bit geranium-like with the cardamom.
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