Lilienfeld
09/09/2016 - 11:27 AM
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9Scent 8Longevity 7Sillage 7.5Bottle

Cruel Moments

Most cruelties take place when you stand more or less
naked, exposed...

I want to take you out so you know that you mean something to me,
but it is so cold and I don’t know where to go.

...Neroli Water Absolue, ethereal-cool, fruity rose.
A lukewarm bath, reaching for a bar of soap, alone, defenseless, powerless...

I brought you flowers, with a pretty ribbon,
but they won’t bloom as beautifully as last spring.

...pale lilac foam, cloudy musk bubbles bursting on cool,
slowly warming skin...

I want to kiss you so you feel good.
I’m just too tired to share my nights with you.

...Ylang Ylang - delicately sweet, blossom roughly opened, white buds
wanting to close up again, shy...

I want to cry and I want to love,
but all my tears are used up.

...aldehydic appearing entrance, hidden vulnerability, a touch
of silky lingerie sliding through still damp hands...bitter...

but all my tears are used up.
For another love,
another love.

http://tinyurl.com/bxtjex2

A Chanel-like, chamois-pink Guerlain, with a hint of self-loving,
determined willingness to suffer.

;)
The perfect (Chanel ;) woman for the scent, -> http://tinyurl.com/h2jq88r

Lyrics: Tom Odell, adapted:D
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19 Comments
VivanteVivante 3 years ago
@DonVanVliet: Twenty characters is a lot though :-))
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LilienfeldLilienfeld 3 years ago
Whether I'm already asleep, who knows @N1ceNose ;-D
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VivanteVivante 3 years ago
just a test @Lilienfeld :-)
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Helena1411Helena1411 6 years ago
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Beautiful, in a poetic, linguistic, scent-describing, associative way. Simply beautiful.
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YataganYatagan 7 years ago
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You're right, that's not a Guerlain, it's much more like... yeah, a Chanel in my opinion. By the way: you did a great cover version.
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Escada1970Escada1970 8 years ago
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I've read it so often, and it always touches me anew. Wonderful, my dear Lily.
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AzaharAzahar 9 years ago
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This comment touches me, hits a nerve, actually two nerves.
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MelisandeMelisande 9 years ago
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I just ordered a sample after a nice salesperson got me hooked with a tester. It's truly a beautiful, flattering scent. Melancholy trophy for this poetic comment!
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PaloneraPalonera 9 years ago
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I will read it again - and again and again...
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ErgreifendErgreifend 9 years ago
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It's beautifully reworked :D
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MorgainaMorgaina 9 years ago
I already knew why this one isn't making it to my wishlist ;-)
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EstateEstate 9 years ago
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And once again, the wishlist just got a little longer :)
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ChanelleChanelle 9 years ago
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Thank you, delicate lily! How lovely!
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ZoraZora 9 years ago
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A wonderful comment.
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Spring67Spring67 9 years ago
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Yeah, it's beautiful and... your comment too! ;-)
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Sweetsmell75Sweetsmell75 9 years ago
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Your comment resonates with me deeply. Trophy down!
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JumiJumi 9 years ago
Your comment invites daydreaming... Hopefully, the scent does too :)
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KugeldistelKugeldistel 9 years ago
A wonderfully poetic comment.
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KirthiKirthi 9 years ago
Lily, so beautifully written!! :***
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