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12/11/2020 - 06:54 PM
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The Scent of Long-Past Summers

The summers of Juno's youth had been so hot, all the fields shimmering like fire, the grasses drying out before the harvest, and because there was hardly any water left, Granny Gertrude watered the meadows with chamomile tea so they wouldn't catch fire. The hay then smelled healthier overall, not quite so sharp, rather sweeter and rounder, and from the sandy-colored ends, one could see the yellowish pearls disappear, first still shimmering, soon only flickering.
And because all the fruit also evaporated far too quickly, they placed slices of fruit bread in the bags with the Virginia tobacco during the hay harvest, which kept the fine cut somewhat moist in the mornings, and when Juno got hungry in the field, he was allowed to eat from it. That was the scent of summer for him, the steaming hay with the dry raisins, finely spiced tobacco, and the buzzing of bees, which in the distant magnolia blossoms, glowing in the trees on the horizon, had long since found no nectar and desperately drank ambrette drops.
When Juno thinks of the hay harvest today, the images pass by him again - only quieter now - for a few hours in the room, the scent of long-past summers.

(With thanks to FvSpee)
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34 Comments
UntermWertUntermWert 4 years ago
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That sounds wonderful too. I’ll test it out soon, and then I’ll think of Juno’s memories…
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DelightfulDelightful 5 years ago
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A dreamy picture, it really feels like this lovely scent is wafting around you. :D.. It makes you want to lie down on fresh hay...
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KylesaKylesa 5 years ago
Beautiful!!! Simply beautiful!!!
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MonsieurTestMonsieurTest 5 years ago
And again, a very beautiful memory film...
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TablaTabla 5 years ago
I like fruit bread, tobacco, and flowers. A lovely summer story.
Adding it to my wishlist.
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IrisNobileIrisNobile 5 years ago
Your words beam me right into the dry, spicy-sweet summer of youth from Juno... and somehow it suddenly smells delicious ;))
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MadameLegrasMadameLegras 5 years ago
You've told a lovely short story. The scent sounds interesting, and your description gives a good hint of it. But I wonder if I would want to smell like that??
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Brelles530Brelles530 5 years ago
Beautiful scent description!!
I always enjoy reading your comments.
A little trophy is heading to the neighboring country...
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PonticusPonticus 5 years ago
No smoke, no haze, no stench of thick tar, incense, or oud? And you like it! I'm amazed!
For me, the perfume you presented here is the first in a long time that I think I could really enjoy. The comment is a bit short for a precise assessment, but the first impression is tempting!
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Melisse2Melisse2 5 years ago
For me, the hay was dusty.
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GandixGandix 5 years ago
Even though dried fruit is problematic, a beautiful comment.
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Medianus76Medianus76 5 years ago
How scents can truly bring back the magic of days gone by...
A beautiful comment told in the colors of summer...
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FvSpeeFvSpee 5 years ago
You're welcome! I'll pass the thanks on to Granny Gertrude. I'm really glad you liked it, but it wasn't really my thing. And don't forget: "For good reason - Juno is round."
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HasiHasi 5 years ago
What a lovely comment, but I hate fruitcake, yuck!
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ToppineToppine 5 years ago
I can easily believe that Juno still thinks of the hay harvest with those described lovely scents. You've brought us a fragrant, exciting memory! It must be a beautiful fragrance....
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SiebenkäsSiebenkäs 5 years ago
Very nice and inspired comment about the dream of today, which definitely makes one very curious.
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RunaRuna 5 years ago
It reads a bit "brighter" - maybe because it's summer! Dried fruits have their charm too; I quite like that sometimes. Overall, it might be a solid fragrance with a solid base.
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NuiWhakakoreNuiWhakakore 5 years ago
Dust-dry story, now I'm almost in the mood for a chamomile tea - but just almost ;-)
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ViolettViolett 5 years ago
All in all, a very dry scenario.
Based on your story and everything that's in it, it could smell good.
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ChizzaChizza 5 years ago
Not my cup of tea, but very nicely described :)
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AndrulaAndrula 5 years ago
.. now I have movie scenes in my mind .. You end with your last sentence almost melancholic, yet still gentle .. very beautiful text!!
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CravacheCravache 5 years ago
Hot summers can definitely smell like civet, labdanum, or cumin - but with Jesuits, it's probably all about dried fruit and chamomile tea :)
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GschpusiGschpusi 5 years ago
If it doesn't smell fermented... I like fruits a lot.
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MörderbieneMörderbiene 5 years ago
I find your text much nicer than the scent - the fruit was too dominant for me.
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SchatzSucherSchatzSucher 5 years ago
Very nicely written. I'm not sure about the scent, but hot summers are not for me.
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YataganYatagan 5 years ago
Beautiful text about an intriguing fragrance.
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MissKittyMissKitty 5 years ago
a touching comment that evokes a lot of images in me.
Makes me curious about the scent :)
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SalvaSalva 5 years ago
Very nice pictures of what seems to be an interesting fragrance.
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Can777Can777 5 years ago
I'm always a bit hesitant with scents that have dried fruit!
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PollitaPollita 5 years ago
There's a lot in there that appeals to me. And once again, such a lovely story.
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ShakingShaking 5 years ago
Sounds wonderful on paper and in your story... I hope the dried fruits stay pleasantly subtle.
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PinkdawnPinkdawn 5 years ago
Interesting mix - chamomile, hay, dried fruits, tobacco...
I just wonder how Granny Gertrude made the chamomile tea when there was hardly any water left. I don't have much else to say about it, though.
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IsolaniIsolani 5 years ago
Exciting: something with bees, magnolias, and burning up - I'm in!
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AtanarjuatAtanarjuat 5 years ago
The scent of summers long gone - beautifully captured!
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