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Oh no?! "What now?", "He's here..."
"Come on, finally he's gone"
"No, I don't want to, what if he catches us like last time?" I replied to him.
"But you're scared of everything, right? Nothing's going to happen, come on, don't be a chicken, you promised one way or another," he said, pulling me by my arm.
"Okay, but just for a moment, okay?"
"Yeah, yeah, just a moment," he replied with a smirk.
That's when I knew it, we would take much longer again and he would catch us.
And then it started, we slowly opened the door... "Huh?, oh no!"; "What now?" he asked, looking at me confused,
"The door, the door is of course locked, (did we really think he would let us in again?)"
He replied, "I knew it, I prepared myself..." and pulled a key from his pocket, it was the key that fit the door (hopefully),
"Well then, open the door and let's quickly see what's inside"
*Klick* he slowly opened the door but *squeak* the door made such loud noises that I really thought he would hear us from outside, but then the door was open and I noticed the exchanged posters of football players and rappers on the walls, the room was as expected messy and it was really stuffy, what can I say, typical for him, my oldest brother, but it was exciting, we just wanted to go in and find out what he had been hiding in the bag, "come on, we need to find the bag...",
After a while, we found the bag, it was a Douglas bag, but the contents were empty, "where could it be?" I asked, my other brother said, "it's probably in his closet," so we opened the closet door and bam!! there it was, a sparkling gold bar in the shape of a perfume!? "He wanted to hide this from us?" my brother asked, I nodded and immediately took the perfume and sprayed it on my wrist *pshhht*
And even though I hadn't even smelled it properly, I whispered, "wow," because the scent quickly rose to my nose and what can I say, I had never smelled anything like it in my life before, it was just awesome, I felt cool and powerful, even though he could catch us at any moment, I didn't care... but then, I heard the front door open, I didn't want to leave because the scent was too beautiful, but I also didn't want to get in trouble, and said, "No, right?!", "What now?" my brother asked, "He's here..." as soon as he heard that, he was gone faster than you could blink, so I quickly put the gold bar back and was just about to leave the room...
And there he stood, my oldest brother, he grabbed me and asked angrily: "What are you doing here, you little brat?" Before I could lie to him, he started sniffing and he just said, "So you found my new perfume," (back then I was shocked how he could smell it and today I know, 1 Million has a very strong sillage) and then he asked, "Do you like it?"
I just nodded and dashed out of his room. In my room, I was finally relieved, "Phew, that was close," I said, looking at my other brother, and we just started laughing, even though it wasn't funny. Today, we sometimes tell each other the story from back then and we still laugh about it.
Today, I still think that 1 Million is one of the best perfumes in the world, but it's a shame that you have to smell it on everyone, yet it remains a perfume with a special memory for me forever...
"No, I don't want to, what if he catches us like last time?" I replied to him.
"But you're scared of everything, right? Nothing's going to happen, come on, don't be a chicken, you promised one way or another," he said, pulling me by my arm.
"Okay, but just for a moment, okay?"
"Yeah, yeah, just a moment," he replied with a smirk.
That's when I knew it, we would take much longer again and he would catch us.
And then it started, we slowly opened the door... "Huh?, oh no!"; "What now?" he asked, looking at me confused,
"The door, the door is of course locked, (did we really think he would let us in again?)"
He replied, "I knew it, I prepared myself..." and pulled a key from his pocket, it was the key that fit the door (hopefully),
"Well then, open the door and let's quickly see what's inside"
*Klick* he slowly opened the door but *squeak* the door made such loud noises that I really thought he would hear us from outside, but then the door was open and I noticed the exchanged posters of football players and rappers on the walls, the room was as expected messy and it was really stuffy, what can I say, typical for him, my oldest brother, but it was exciting, we just wanted to go in and find out what he had been hiding in the bag, "come on, we need to find the bag...",
After a while, we found the bag, it was a Douglas bag, but the contents were empty, "where could it be?" I asked, my other brother said, "it's probably in his closet," so we opened the closet door and bam!! there it was, a sparkling gold bar in the shape of a perfume!? "He wanted to hide this from us?" my brother asked, I nodded and immediately took the perfume and sprayed it on my wrist *pshhht*
And even though I hadn't even smelled it properly, I whispered, "wow," because the scent quickly rose to my nose and what can I say, I had never smelled anything like it in my life before, it was just awesome, I felt cool and powerful, even though he could catch us at any moment, I didn't care... but then, I heard the front door open, I didn't want to leave because the scent was too beautiful, but I also didn't want to get in trouble, and said, "No, right?!", "What now?" my brother asked, "He's here..." as soon as he heard that, he was gone faster than you could blink, so I quickly put the gold bar back and was just about to leave the room...
And there he stood, my oldest brother, he grabbed me and asked angrily: "What are you doing here, you little brat?" Before I could lie to him, he started sniffing and he just said, "So you found my new perfume," (back then I was shocked how he could smell it and today I know, 1 Million has a very strong sillage) and then he asked, "Do you like it?"
I just nodded and dashed out of his room. In my room, I was finally relieved, "Phew, that was close," I said, looking at my other brother, and we just started laughing, even though it wasn't funny. Today, we sometimes tell each other the story from back then and we still laugh about it.
Today, I still think that 1 Million is one of the best perfumes in the world, but it's a shame that you have to smell it on everyone, yet it remains a perfume with a special memory for me forever...
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Meine Mutter hat's auch IMMER gemerkt. Da war's aber bis zu einem gewissen Grad erlaubt...