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07/03/2014, 08:49 AM
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Commissario Parfumetti Investigates: An Ironic Approach to an Extraordinary Fragrance

The handsome man in his mid-thirties had washed ashore on the southern coast of Sicily near Siracusa. The corpse could not have been in the water for long; the suit seemed to fit perfectly, and in the inner pocket was a document that helped clarify his identity. However, who might have wanted him dead remained a mystery at first.

Commissario Parfumetti was exhausted. For days there had been no leads on the mysterious woman they had stumbled upon. Whenever a crime occurred that required investigation by scent, with fragrance trails at the center of the search, it was clear that only a perfume lover was suitable for further inquiries. "This is a case for our Parfumetti," his colleagues would say with an ironic tone.

Even at the first sighting of the body at the crime scene, Parfumetti had realized that only a crime of passion was possible. The deceased not only had a clean bullet hole in the middle of his forehead; he also bore traces of smudged lipstick on the collar, lapel, and neck - and as a sarcastic message from his murderer, the word "infedele" was written on his forehead in dark red lipstick. "A murderer with a sense of drama and humor," Parfumetti thought amusedly.

And then there was this fragrance in a small unlabeled vial in the right pocket of the jacket… Clearly: a vetiver scent, likely designed for men, but with a soft note, a subtle, almost gentle yet distinctive aura. He would be able to sniff it out among dozens of other vetiver fragrances. The scent left a powdery sillage, reminiscent of the interiors of baroque palaces, of the flowing gowns of the 17th century, but also of the strict gardens of that time with their pruned nature, in a sense captured beauty and clear aesthetic forms, whose wild growth was tamed. "A man with a sense of taste," flashed through his mind. Or a gift from his murderer?

Shortly thereafter, he had picked up the trail of a suspect; a witness claimed to have seen her at the crime scene, knew her name vaguely, but got tangled in contradictions when describing the person.

Even in the stairwell of the old building, he had sensed the same fragrance: vetiver, but also confusing floral notes that were responsible for an androgynous aura, a violet apparently, perhaps a hint of melancholic nostalgic rose, especially the lily of the valley he loved so much, which also performed exceptionally well in men's fragrances (only the ignorant denied this) and finally a soft base that could only have been differentiated if one could stand directly in front of the wearer...

However, the opportunity for direct contact had not yet arisen. The apartment had been broken into, everything had been searched, traces of a hasty but professional break-in found, hardly anything usable - and again only this scent, everywhere, permeating the apartment, lingering in the abandoned clothes. No doubt: she herself wore this fragrance, wanted to surround herself with a subtle aura of masculinity that surely suited her, emphasizing her danger, her unpredictability. A men's fragrance, made for a mysterious woman.

While Parfumetti was still pondering this thought, in a sense already envisioning the woman before him, brunette, dark eyes, a strict pantsuit, elegant patent leather shoes, a small-caliber weapon in her handbag, he did not notice how this pale, blonde yet inconspicuous young woman with sneakers and water-blue eyes followed him into the café, patiently waiting until he had finished his espresso and headed towards the restroom.

A faint click - his instincts were as sharp as ever - made him pause when opening the restroom door and reach for his weapon; the scent of a noble, almost baroque vetiver fragrance in his nose, he hurriedly turned around with a bad premonition, - but the last thing he saw were water-blue eyes and the muzzle of a pistol aimed at his forehead.
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34 Comments
AugustoAugusto 1 year ago
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Ah, please make a movie out of it. Although my imagination is more than enough. Very nice!
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YataganYatagan 1 year ago
Thanks for stopping by again @Augusto!
11 years ago! 😅
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ChimneyChimney 12 years ago
An excerpt from the back cover... read a bit... checkout! Your writing style is perfect, but I keep repeating myself! My current favorite detective is a new Brit, but I'm now enjoying part 2 to dive into the smart Italian :)
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ShamisShamis 12 years ago
Oh, then I'll just let Parfumetti save me. Of course, it will survive!
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ShamisShamis 12 years ago
I was really looking forward to reading your comment, and then it turns out to be a thriller! If I had known that just before bedtime... Man, I hope I don't end up dreaming about water-blue eyes now, you rascal :)
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AuraAura 12 years ago
Hahaha, that's brilliant! I'm joining the petition for Parfumetti to survive and solve more cases! It's always something special when you get a bit less serious, great change of pace!
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FittleworthFittleworth 12 years ago
Wow...! But this can't be how it ends - Commissario Parfumetti has to survive and solve this case! I hope there's a sequel coming! Crime trophy for you!
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KleopatraKleopatra 12 years ago
And the Oscar goes to: YATAGAN! Or has it not been made into a movie yet? It's about time!
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ClarissaClarissa 12 years ago
Amazing, I love thrillers, please give us more of that!
What a wonderful comment, this scent is going on my wishlist because my partner loves vetiver too....!
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ErgreifendErgreifend 12 years ago
You write absolutely wonderfully. Great style. The thing with the bathroom door :D
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SchmörkesSchmörkes 12 years ago
Haha! Well written... Hats off to you, sir!
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PaloneraPalonera 12 years ago
Donna Leon would be murderously proud of you, :-)!
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DobbsDobbs 12 years ago
I'm waiting impatiently, dribbling, to see how you'll handle this cliffhanger ;o)
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PlutoPluto 12 years ago
Parfumetti needs to survive and go into production!
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KiengiraKiengira 12 years ago
When is the second part coming???? Literature prize!
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0815abc0815abc 12 years ago
Cool!
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RosedeReshtRosedeResht 12 years ago
Wonderful!!!
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SeeroseSeerose 12 years ago
Bang! Next, please! Is she still killing it?
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IngerInger 12 years ago
I want more!!! Great idea!!
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MeggiMeggi 12 years ago
Sensational! Except for the ending; I wanted to ask you for a license!
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ZionistZionist 12 years ago
" - Mori damnato!" Yes, crimes of passion are worth delving into.
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TaurusTaurus 12 years ago
Commissario Parfumetti - the sniffing detective on duty ;-)
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KugeldistelKugeldistel 12 years ago
Great comment. I'm sure Commissario Parfumetti will solve many more cases, because only real life is so mundane that instead of being taken out by a tough brunette like Emma Peel, you get sent to the afterlife by an unassuming blonde. :-)
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BaptisteBaptiste 12 years ago
I urgently need a few vacation thrillers to read. So, if you feel like it... :)
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ZoraZora 12 years ago
Thanks for this entertaining comment. The good Commissario Parfumetti probably had an even stronger vetiver in his pocket and was able to fend off the attack successfully. We'll surely find out next time :).

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ErgoproxyErgoproxy 12 years ago
And then Parfumetti brought her together with Kouros because he was in the bathroom and stuff...;):))
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TurandotTurandot 12 years ago
Somehow, you have to manage to bring him back to life. There are still so many unsolved cases to crack here :))
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FischlandmenFischlandmen 12 years ago
Hey, come on, you can't make it that easy and leave no room for a sequel :-) this is the stuff that blockbusters are made of;-) ..... You've already got an Oscar :-)
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CillyCilly 12 years ago
No! Parfumetti lives! He had the last-second trick up his sleeve (in the TZ, haha) and we're looking forward to many more adventures! Aaaah! Great guy, great comment!
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MissKittyMissKitty 12 years ago
Great! Unfortunately, Parfumetti has now bitten the dust. Who will solve spectacular murder cases next? Maybe one of the trophies holds a detective Djinn?
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DuftJunkieDuftJunkie 12 years ago
Simply amazing how you bring fragrances closer to people with your words. Thank you!
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GaukeleyaGaukeleya 12 years ago
Wow, drama, baby! And Yatagan as our undercover agent *g* right in the middle! :-D
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Jpg153Jpg153 12 years ago
With a little more effort, we can turn this into 90 minutes on ARD/ZDF ;-))
I hope the rose isn't too prominent, and then I'll add it to my watchlist.
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MercuroMercuro 12 years ago
Oh how tragically exciting! Trophy!
Can you buy/test this fragrance weapon here?
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