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03/05/2021 - 09:39 AM
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Heywood's Hyacinths

Heywood had imagined his Mars mission somewhat differently. He had dreamed of pressing the one button that melts the ice at the poles and envelops the Red Planet in an atmosphere, becoming a hero in a breathtaking adventure. Time-lapse terraforming. Designed by aliens. Hollywood style. Instead, he had been sitting in his small container for years, watching his extremities grow. Lack of gravity. No spectacular planetary panorama, just a ridiculous hatch, the same view every day, sun or sandstorm. And then this pointless skyping, lost words in the void of space, no conversation, ramshackle monologues.
Since then, he had been talking to his plants in the greenhouse under the grow-lux lamps. Little grew in this world. When he stuck his head in, it was all bright, cool, citrusy mint. Heywood meowed their molecules over the heavy, sweet blossoms that grew further back, somewhere between the ginger roots, with which he alternated spicy, sharp hissing sounds or warm words. It was always a true floral Babel at first, green-herb gibberish, but all in all, amusing.
Soon the hyacinths had taken over the conversation, whispering humid flower shops into Heywood's brain, speaking sweet stone tiles with earthy little clumps in ginger puddles. Wilted nonsense, somewhat indolic. Heywood occasionally sprayed a bit of sweet resin mist into the hyacinths, listening to them, hour after hour the words became more myrrh-like, musty. Tomorrow I’ll give you the mint again. Heywood only had this world.
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Vala's Enchanted Perfumery based in Prague claims to create magic, to generate images from the plant ingredients and the creative creativity of the people involved in the process. "My creations have all been born in my hands and warmed by my skin. And before that, they were a part of nature," says Moi Yggdottir. "Martis" begins furiously herbaceous-green-fresh, then develops an interesting ginger-warm floral heart note, before the scent increasingly becomes musty-indolic. Mars projects for about six to seven hours, predominantly cockpit-filling.

(Thanks to Shaking)
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35 Comments
DelightfulDelightful 4 years ago
Oh poor Heywood, that sounds almost like cabin fever.. The base of the scent sounds a bit overwhelming ;)
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RosalieRosalie 5 years ago
So completely "Silent in Space," one starts dancing with plants and feeling the molecules... poor Heywood...
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FlirtyFlowerFlirtyFlower 5 years ago
I really like stories =D! That's why I enjoyed reading this so much! Trophy
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ParfümleinParfümlein 5 years ago
Wonderful use of words. And yet, such a thought-provoking story! Another great comment!
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GoldGold 5 years ago
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Sounds great - except for the base.
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MelodyMelody 5 years ago
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"Heywood mumbled her molecules..." ...... Genius!
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Brelles530Brelles530 5 years ago
If it smells musty, I'd rather send it back into orbit ;)
Great comment!!
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IrisNobileIrisNobile 5 years ago
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... when the view is limited - and the scent languages remain incomprehensible .... I wouldn't be on board for such a mission either ;))
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GandixGandix 5 years ago
That wouldn't be for me. Indolic is a no-go. But great space story.
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PonticusPonticus 5 years ago
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Probably a very realistic description of terraforming on Mars, but be careful that the ESA or NASA doesn't find out, otherwise no astronauts will sign up for a Mars mission! I bet the scent would look good on Mars, but here on Earth, I definitely need it less!
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MonsieurTestMonsieurTest 5 years ago
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That was once again a comment that really gives you a different kind of EXPERIENCE; great!
And now I know what I always suspected: I do NOT want to go to Mars!
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AndrulaAndrula 5 years ago
Heywood, the greatest botanist on planet Mars. Very impressive your pictures! Meowy Earth greetings :D
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NuiWhakakoreNuiWhakakore 5 years ago
Heywood is just no Arnold, oh, how boring is terraforming! But at least it smells good and he has company, well, sort of...
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AzuraAzura 5 years ago
Creating a good hyacinth scent is probably almost as difficult as a Mars mission ;) Not easy creatures... Your text, in contrast to Heywood's mission, is an exciting trip to Mars.
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BastianBastian 5 years ago
You really brought the scent to life for us. I always enjoy reading your comments.
But with this fragrance, I think I'll pass. :-))
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FvSpeeFvSpee 5 years ago
Little growth in this world seems to be the core message... Maybe Pirx will come by for a visit someday.
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Medianus76Medianus76 5 years ago
Heywood just has to take what he can get. As a pioneer of a manned Mars mission, you can't have too many expectations. I never question your lovely comment, but I do wonder about Martis's appeal. Seems like it's just average after all...
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SiebenkäsSiebenkäs 5 years ago
A realistic space adventure - a spacily idea that makes the scent weightlessly dramatic. Serious pun trophy included with cockpit attachment!
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Melisse2Melisse2 5 years ago
In the time-lapse of a two-hour movie, the emptiness on Mars is quite bearable. When Heywood listens to the hyacinths, it must be really bad with the loneliness.
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FliolineFlioline 5 years ago
And now? Here we are, staring at Mars (the Moon used to be enough) and thinking of Heywood. If only he knew we were thinking of him. Is there any way to send him a saving letter?
Well written.
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KnopfnaseKnopfnase 5 years ago
The magic that the scent doesn't create, you bring with your words.
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ToppineToppine 5 years ago
Admit it, Heywood was the inspiration for Mark Watney and you wrote the script for "The Martian"! Hopefully, Ridley Scott shared the profits with you..........
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PinkdawnPinkdawn 5 years ago
A peculiar blend. Too unique and spicy for me. And then there's the hyacinths... I love the scent of them in general. But in perfumes, not so much. They come across too strong. Original and esoteric doesn't have to mean pleasant. I'm fine as long as the scent is appealing. I don't expect any magic from a perfume.
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Lucy55Lucy55 5 years ago
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My part of nature suspects the escape from the stuffy cockpit. ;)
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SchalkerinSchalkerin 5 years ago
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Cool mission, Earth is better.
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LeloupLeloup 5 years ago
A space story... totally my thing ;)) and as always, brilliantly written!!
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HasiHasi 5 years ago
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Beautiful story. It reminded me of 'Silent Running'; I've seen it several times and found it really impressive.
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PollitaPollita 5 years ago
Sweetheart and I recently wrote about flowery talk due to a misreading. Now we have it here in the universe. Great wordplay, my dear. Let flowers speak!
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FriesinFriesin 5 years ago
Sounds like a Corona afternoon in Friesland...
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ErgoproxyErgoproxy 5 years ago
Hyacinth is already hard to bear in nature, so the notes really need to be skillfully blended in the fragrance.
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GschpusiGschpusi 5 years ago
I'd still be cautious with the Hyas.
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SchatzSucherSchatzSucher 5 years ago
The wilted hyacinth wash on Mars is probably less exciting than one might think. However, you've still given the fragrance a worthy context.
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ViolettViolett 5 years ago
If it's that bleak on Mars, you end up being grateful for even the slightly grumpy flowers in society... Just hope they don't take over up there...;-) Great story, intriguing scent, mission accomplished!
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Jo13579Jo13579 5 years ago
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Just watched an episode of 'Archer' about attempted Mars colonization, and now this ;-) Great, I'm having a Martian day. Well written, even if the scent sounds more solid to nice.
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ChizzaChizza 5 years ago
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A solid 7/10 for sure.
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