Floyd
03/05/2021 - 09:39 AM
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Scent

Heywood's Hyacinths

Heywood had somehow imagined his Mars mission differently. He had dreamed of being the hero in a breathtaking adventure, pushing the one button that would melt the ice at the poles and envelop the Red Planet in an atmosphere. Time-lapse terraforming. Created by aliens. Hollywood style. Instead, he'd been sitting in his little container for years, watching his extremities grow. Lack of gravity. No spectacular planetary panorama, just a ridiculous hatch, always the same view, sun or sandstorm. And then this pointless skyping, lost words in space, no conversation, ramshackle monologues.
Since then he talked to his plants in the greenhouse under the grow-lux lights. Little grew in this world. When he stuck his head inside, it was all bright, cool, citrusy mint. Heywood mewed its molecules over the heavy, sweetish blossoms that grew further back, somewhere among the ginger roots with which he exchanged either spicy-hot sibilants or warm words. This was always a veritable floral babel at first, green-herbaceous gibberish, but always fun.
Soon the hyacinths had usurped the conversation, breathed humid floral stores into Heywood's brain, spoke sweet stone tiles with earthy little lumps in puddles of ginger. Withered ramblings, sort of indolic. Heywood sprayed some sweet resin mist into the hyacinths now and then, listened to them, hour by hour the words grew myrrhier, mustier. Tomorrow I'll make you the mint again. Heywood had just this world.
¶¶ Vala's Enchanted Perfumery, based in Prague, says it tries to create magic, to create images, from the plant ingredients and the creative genius of the people involved in the process. "My creations have all been born in my hands and warmed by my skin. And before that, they were a part of nature." says Moi Yggdottir. "Martis" starts furiously herbaceous-green-fresh, then develops an interesting ginger-warm floral heart note before the fragrance becomes increasingly musty-indolic. Mars projects something six to seven hours predominantly cockpit-filling.

(With thanks to Shaking)
35 Comments
DelightfulDelightful 4 years ago
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Oh poor Heywood, that almost sounds like cabin fever.... The base of the fragrance sounds a bit exhausting ;)
RosalieRosalie 4 years ago
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So quite "Silently in Space" one(s) begins to dance with plants, and to feel the molecules on the tooth....armer Heywood....
FlirtyFlowerFlirtyFlower 4 years ago
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I like yes stories =D! Therefore also insanely happy to read! Cup
ParfümleinParfümlein 4 years ago
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Wonderful power of words. And yet such a thought provoking story! A great commentary once again!
GoldGold 4 years ago
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Sounds very good - except for the base.
MelodyMelody 4 years ago
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"Heywood Mooned Her Molecules...." ...... Genius!
Brelles530Brelles530 4 years ago
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at musty- I'd rather send him back into orbit ;)
Great commi!!
IrisNobileIrisNobile 4 years ago
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... if the (out)view is limited - and the (scent)languages remain incomprehensible .... I would not be on such a mission either ;))
GandixGandix 4 years ago
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That wouldn't be for me. I can't do Indolian. But great space story.
PonticusPonticus 4 years ago
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Probably a very realistic description of terraforming on Mars, but be careful that ESA or NASA don't find out about it, otherwise astronauts will never sign up for a Mars mission! I bet the fragrance cuts a fine figure on Mars, on earth I need it rather less!
MonsieurTestMonsieurTest 4 years ago
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That was once again a comment that gives you a real EXPERIENCE of a different kind;Class!
And now I know what I always suspected: I do NOT want to go to Mars !
AndrulaAndrula 4 years ago
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Heywood , the greatest botanist on planet Mars . Very impressive your pictures ! Maunzige earth greetings :D
NuiWhakakoreNuiWhakakore 4 years ago
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Heywood is just no Arnold, oh what terraforming is bland! But at least it smells good and he has company, at least kind of...
AzuraAzura 4 years ago
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But to make a good hyacinth scent is probably also almost as difficult as a Mars mission ;) No easy creatures...Your text in contrast to Heywood's mission a rousing trip to Mars.
BastianBastian 4 years ago
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Super brought us closer to the fragrance. Read your comments again and again with pleasure
But with this fragrance I prefer to keep my hands off. :-))
FvSpeeFvSpee 4 years ago
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Little grew in this world seems to be the key phrase.... Maybe Pirx will come for a visit.
Medianus76Medianus76 4 years ago
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So Heywood has to take what he can get. As a pioneer of a manned mission to Mars, you can't make too many demands. As always, I never question your fine commentary, but I do question Martis' complaisance. Seems to be midfield after all....
SiebenkäsSiebenkäs 4 years ago
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A realistic space adventure - spacey idea that dramatizes the scent weightless. Serious pun cup incl. cockpit attachment!
Melisse2Melisse2 4 years ago
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In the time-lapse of a two-hour film, the emptiness on Mars is quite bearable.
When Heywood listens to the hyacinths, the loneliness must be bad.
FliolineFlioline 4 years ago
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What do we do now? We sit here staring at Mars (the moon used to be enough.) and think of Heywood. If only he knew we were thinking of him. I wonder if there's any way we can send him a rescue walking letter
Great writing.
KnopfnaseKnopfnase 4 years ago
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The magic that scent doesn't conjure, you create with your words.
ToppineToppine 4 years ago
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Admit it, Heywood was the model for Mark Whatney and you wrote the screenplay for The Martian! Hopefully Ridley Scott shared the profits with you..........
PinkdawnPinkdawn 4 years ago
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A strange mixture. For me too special and spicy. Then there are the hyacinths ... I love the scent. In flowers. Not so much in perfume. They're so overpowering. Original and eso doesn't have to mean fragrant. It's enough for me if the scent is appealing. I don't expect magic from a perfume.
Lucy55Lucy55 4 years ago
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My part of nature suspects the escape from the musty cockpit. ;)
SchalkerinSchalkerin 4 years ago
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Cool mission, Earth is better.
LeloupLeloup 4 years ago
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A space story... very my thing ;)) and as always terrific written!!!
HasiHasi 4 years ago
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beautiful story. I thought of 'Silent in Space', I've seen it several times and found it totally impressive.
PollitaPollita 4 years ago
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Schatzi and I recently wrote about flower jabbering by a reader. Now we have it here in outer space. Great wordplay, dear. Let flowers speak!
FriesinFriesin 4 years ago
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Sounds like a Corona afternoon in Friesland....
ErgoproxyErgoproxy 4 years ago
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Hyacinth is already not easy to bear in nature, in fragrance the notes must be really skillfully incorporated.
GschpusiGschpusi 4 years ago
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I'd still be careful with the hyas
SchatzSucherSchatzSucher 4 years ago
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Withered hyacinth growth on Mars is probably less exciting than one might assume. But you have nevertheless given the scent a worthy frame.
ViolettViolett 4 years ago
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When it's so bleak on Mars, you're even grateful for the company of flowers that tend to be a bit grumpy... If they don't take over up there...;-) Great story, exciting fragrance, mission accomplished!
Jo13579Jo13579 4 years ago
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Watched an episode of 'Archer' with attempted Mars colonization earlier, now this ;-) Great, I'm having a Martian day. Great writing, even if the scent sounds rather solid to nice
ChizzaChizza 4 years ago
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Certainly well served with 7/10.