Witch Doctor by Paraphrase

Witch Doctor 2015

Floyd
07/09/2020 - 08:05 AM
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Witch's Brew

Sleepily, my weary gaze creeps out from a dimly lit black corner of a shabby cedar wood hut, where I lie in dancing shadows, towards the green glow, the glowing crucible, the smoldering mists, the softly wafting figure in the robe and the gnarled, bony features.
'Birch tar and herbal brew - In this concoction lies witch's spawn'
She speaks without moving her lips as she sprinkles various herbs into the bubbling percolate, allowing veils of different colors to softly shimmer, sometimes menthol-bright, sometimes greenish bitter, sometimes olive-sweet-earthy, the sparks flickering before her face, from whose wrinkled leathery skin black beads of sweat from birch tar continuously seep into the brew.
'Patchouli and pure benzoin - So shall you be favorably inclined towards me'
Interwoven with greenish glowing herbal blood in black pulsating birch tar veins, amber-colored benzoin bubbles, medicinally resinous, sweet leathery scented into the old earth of the wooden barrack. Was there a forest somewhere, a world outside the oil-shaped witch's hut on my skin? I close my eyes contentedly for a few quiet hours, perhaps a little enchanted.

(With thanks to Stanze)
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33 Comments
DelightfulDelightful 4 years ago
Wow.. That sounds wonderfully mystical.. A bit of witchcraft in the scent, great :D
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Brelles530Brelles530 5 years ago
greatly written, sounds really enchanting ;)
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GentilhommeGentilhomme 5 years ago
It might not just enchant... I'm truly blown away by this witch's brew... It's a shame it was discontinued... A huge thank you for the decant!
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GandixGandix 5 years ago
I would be open to benzoin, but birch tar... no thanks.
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ZoraZora 5 years ago
Your great witch comment is trying to enchant me, but I’m staying strong :).

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TablaTabla 5 years ago
You seem to have a good rapport with witches if they let you watch them brew. They usually never do that...
Your comment, as always, is fantastic to read and encourages trying it out.
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PrimelPrimel 5 years ago
Creepy beautiful comment! Now I know which scent I'll wear for the next Walpurgis Night ;)
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RosalieRosalie 5 years ago
Stay away from the oven, and just don’t nibble on the house...
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Camey5000Camey5000 5 years ago
A brew. A concoction.
I flee. I'm shy.
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StanzeStanze 5 years ago
Yeah, exactly. Strange, I guess...
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Can777Can777 5 years ago
You didn't actually drink this fragrance, did you? That's only for external use! You wizard of words and imagination!... ;) Very nice!
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RunaRuna 5 years ago
I almost expected a dark, witchy liquid in the bottle and quickly scrolled up just to check, but no, it’s not. You really get to witness the summoning ceremony, and it gives the impression of how the brew unfolds. I think it’s a (positively!) peculiar fragrance presentation.
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Melisse2Melisse2 5 years ago
Sounds like the brew doesn't taste good, but it works.
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SiebenkäsSiebenkäs 5 years ago
Very musical, rhythmic, and expressive... I suggest Christian Brückner as the speaker! Word sound trophy for you!
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FloydFloyd 5 years ago
@MonsieurTest: Maybe you're right, I couldn't really see the face under the hood of the robe in the flickering light ;-)
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MonsieurTestMonsieurTest 5 years ago
Wonderfully imagined and presented.
But for (just this once) we want to doubt: Was the namesake of the unisex fragrance ahead of us commentators? Witch doctors are usually male - it's an important role in these societies ;)
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SonnenwendeSonnenwende 5 years ago
At some point, I will fall victim to your enchanting formulas... spellbound... maybe ;-)).
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RenataRenata 5 years ago
Really strong comment, Witch's Cup for you...........
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PinkdawnPinkdawn 5 years ago
It's noted for Halloween - in case someone invites me to a party. ;-)
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SchatzSucherSchatzSucher 5 years ago
Nice, nice once again, but I'm not dancing around the brew :-D
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FvSpeeFvSpee 5 years ago
Macbeth cup with Hurlyburly.
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MadameLegrasMadameLegras 5 years ago
Interesting scent notes..... This concoction probably leaves you more stoned in the corner than flying off on a broom....
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GschpusiGschpusi 5 years ago
Wow.... Mine
Great comment
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AndrulaAndrula 5 years ago
.. that nodding witch's smile - great comment that invites readers into the cabin and before they know it, they’re comfortably dozing off in the corner like a cozy witch.
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MörderbieneMörderbiene 5 years ago
Yes, you've enchanted me too ;)
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CravacheCravache 5 years ago
Your amazing texts can bewitch!
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ToppineToppine 5 years ago
Is everything above board here? I'm a bit scared and will pass on the herbal blood.....:-))
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KovexKovex 5 years ago
Just reading the scent notes sounds great. You've painted some wonderful pictures with your text again. Nice!
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HasiHasi 5 years ago
Your texts are incredibly easy to read aloud and have a captivating effect.
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GentilhommeGentilhomme 5 years ago
Sounds right up my alley, adding it to my wishlist and trophy!
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YataganYatagan 5 years ago
Haha, very nice, that's him. ;)
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PollitaPollita 5 years ago
Sounds like a real potion. I wonder if it gives any special powers too?
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ParfümleinParfümlein 5 years ago
What a brilliant comment! If I have a question about witches in the future, I'll reach out to you directly! Awesome!
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