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Mustang69
06/29/2017 - 07:41 PM
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5Scent 6Longevity 6Sillage 7Bottle

"Is everything okay with you, darling?"

He knocked cautiously on the bathroom door. A faint sobbing could be heard from inside. With a slight queasiness in his stomach, he opened the door a crack. An ominous, familiar waft of air rushed towards him. He could barely avoid turning his face away and took in the scene with one glance.

The last time he had seen her was about two hours ago. They had crossed paths in the hallway. "Dyeing my hair..." she had chirped happily, a long drink in her hand, and winked at him. Now she sat on the edge of the bathtub. The mood had shifted, the room conveyed exhaustion. With a vacant stare, she looked at the utensils scattered all over the sink: smeared plastic gloves, a thickened brush, numerous squeezed tubes and plastic bottles. On the tiles below, he spotted two small towels whose days were numbered. Crumpled up, full of color stains. The streaks around her on the floor had been hastily wiped up with bathroom cleaner. Behind her lay the children's pine needle shampoo, upside down in the tub. The contents sluggishly poured into the drain.

Weary, she looked up at him. The glass of vodka tonic in her hand was not the first one. At her neck, he noticed small dark droplets running from her hair down her nape, slowly drying there. "Stupid stuff, something just isn't working," she mumbled, "I've already tried it twice."

The air was thick. A biting, chlorinated stench of ammonia and hydrogen peroxide hung in the bathroom, mingling with the green of bathroom cleaner and shampoo. Over it all, the sharp fumes of the consumed alcohol hovered.

"Should I give it a try?" He took a deep breath and smiled. She thought for a moment, nodded, and walked towards him. "If you think so."
Updated on 06/30/2017
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8 Comments
PlutoPluto 8 years ago
Very clear :o) I get it, I won't be testing it.
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YataganYatagan 8 years ago
That's awesome!!!
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AzaharAzahar 8 years ago
Wow. Thank you very much for the extremely vivid and fragrant warning, well written!
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MeggiMeggi 8 years ago
Hopefully the kids are already asleep.
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MokkaMokka 8 years ago
Instinctively, my hand goes to my hair. Tomorrow.....! Great comment :-)
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MoniEMoniE 8 years ago
Oh dear ... I think I'll pass on testing this, even though I'm currently looking for a nice "forest scent" ... Thanks for the impressive comment :-) ...
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DOCBEDOCBE 8 years ago
You can easily imagine the described scenario in every way :-)
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ClarasTanteClarasTante 8 years ago
Wow. Very vividly described. I’ll be careful... Thanks!
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