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Shirley
you meet her by chance in the garden center: you accidentally bumped into her with your fully loaded shopping cart and are surprised by her hearty laughter.
She is inconspicuous; dark blonde, medium height, practically dressed as if for a walk in the woods. Under her fingernails, you discover fresh soil.
Somehow she smells of fresh air and leaves wet with morning dew. Vegetable leaves.
You had no idea how noble that could smell...
You could steal horses with her. Bake bread. Clean up. Lie in the hay and watch the clouds.
Live.
And it would be so easy....
She is one for a second glance. ...
She is inconspicuous; dark blonde, medium height, practically dressed as if for a walk in the woods. Under her fingernails, you discover fresh soil.
Somehow she smells of fresh air and leaves wet with morning dew. Vegetable leaves.
You had no idea how noble that could smell...
You could steal horses with her. Bake bread. Clean up. Lie in the hay and watch the clouds.
Live.
And it would be so easy....
She is one for a second glance. ...
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It's strikingly understated and natural.
I really like the scent too.