Amber Teutonic by D.S. & Durga

Amber Teutonic 2018

Theris
05/22/2024 - 01:10 PM
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10Scent 7Longevity 7Sillage

With Rhyme to Green Amberstone

(The full version or reference to the statement)

On a sunny day I left the house
because the gray walls became too tight
and bumped my head on the ceiling.

It was time again to see something green
No, not the broccoli between my teeth
I mean to go into the forest.

On a new path that I walked
I discovered an entrance to the woods
a contrasting, light-filled reception
where many pine cones hung

Should I go in? And I started to ponder
I dared a small step inside
Then a cone plopped down on my head

For a moment I wobbled, then it began to speak:
"Hey hey stranger, come right in
This here is the mandarin grove"
The cone speaks!?, I thought I was imagining it
Maybe the aftereffects of yesterday's wine

"No no, this is real," it replied
"Welcome home, don't you know it?"
"The hideout of the green amberstone?"
"My cone friends will show the way there
Condition between us, it stays a secret"

Okay okay, I thought and stopped asking
Gave the little pest my word
A small adventure can’t hurt

I followed the cones and beams of light
Vitamin D flowed through my veins
The slightly fruity scent felt like a blessing
I felt happiness expanding within me

The trees grew brighter, the air more ethereal
Resin gleamed in amber colors
Similar to honeycombs
It smelled as if the pines were coming closer and closer

At the end of the path, I saw a shrine
Adorned with woods and resins
What could be hidden here
It felt like a farce

I opened the chest
My mouth fell open
It sparkled green-white
Like a mix of jade and danburite

I felt the scent intoxication awaken within me
Green, as if I were a piece of the forest
White wings unfolding
Graceful, with a soft embrace

Carried me away, made me fly
Eyes that wouldn’t open
Dazed by the scent intoxication
Like in nirvana - senses unhinged

Arriving back on the ground of reality
I noticed my senses again
Just a bit dazed

I found myself back at the entrance to the woods
Exactly the same position
Only there was no forest and entrance anymore
Was it all just an illusion?

My gaze fell to the ground
And I didn’t want to believe it
There I saw a cone lying
I thought only, come on now, I’m going home...
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29 Comments
Camey5000Camey5000 4 months ago
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Discovered it today and really enjoyed reading it.
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PuderperlePuderperle 5 months ago
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You have even more beautiful rhymes! Really well written. 👍🏻
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RumSkullyRumSkully 1 year ago
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😂😂 I enjoyed reading this very much. If the evil cork turns into a little candle, it gives me the creeps, but hope springs up with the prospect of a little treasure.
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NightFighterNightFighter 2 years ago
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Just added it to my watchlist.
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SonarIDSonarID 2 years ago
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Oh, it really takes away all your senses! 🙌👌
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MidnightsMidnights 2 years ago
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Wow, I totally missed this praise! How beautifully it rhymes. It must be an amazing scent that inspired you to such poetic heights. You've rhymed it onto my wishlist! ✨
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SchalkerinSchalkerin 2 years ago
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Great scent, awesome review.
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Konst121Konst121 2 years ago
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That makes me curious! Nicely written 😁
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SchatzSucherSchatzSucher 2 years ago
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A lovely, cohesive description of a truly great fragrance. I found it to be like a walk in the woods when you spray it on.
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FragillyFragilly 2 years ago
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I'm happy for you that you found such an inspiring hit, dear Theris... Thanks to the cork!
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ExUserExUser 2 years ago
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What beautiful words about a fragrance I unfortunately don't know... very affectionate and full of poetic undertones 🤗👌❤️
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BillyBumblerBillyBumbler 2 years ago
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Wow, that sounds sooooo good! And so beautifully written, I was completely lost in the enchanted forest.
I definitely have to try it, I already like the brand anyway :)
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SpatzlSpatzl 2 years ago
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Could you please toss me the cork? Then I'll dive into this enchanted forest too.
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GandixGandix 2 years ago
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Great to read your enthusiasm... For me, the sandalwood had a coconut fig vibe again.
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TofuwachtelTofuwachtel 2 years ago
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Absolutely enchanting and captivatingly written!
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ChipsySoulChipsySoul 2 years ago
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A charming, cheeky poem. Could you please throw the cone at my head? I’d like to dive into this illusion too ✨
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FloydFloyd 2 years ago
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I'm with Marieposa on this. Great!
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MarieposaMarieposa 2 years ago
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But let's not rush back to reality too quickly. It's so beautiful in this magical world!
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BridaBrida 2 years ago
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Teeth just have to be able to speak, otherwise they aren't real ;-)
I happily followed you on your paths!
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SchoeibksrSchoeibksr 2 years ago
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Very beautifully written, it sounds like it will be a melancholic journey home...
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BosworthBosworth 2 years ago
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Fragrance high instead of broccoli between the teeth... Really enjoyed reading this.
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AndinAndin 2 years ago
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Haha, I would definitely take home such a little talking cone :) Nicely written with a wink, I like it.
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ElAttarineElAttarine 2 years ago
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Great! The talking cone and the green amber... Sounds wonderful!
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CoraKirschCoraKirsch 2 years ago
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A 10 is a 10 is a 10 😊 I'm happy for you!
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SalvaSalva 2 years ago
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Such great lines can come about when you're excited. You can really feel that here. Enjoyed reading it!
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ExUserExUser 2 years ago
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Absolutely wonderfully written. Thank you for this effort.
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DuftgroupieDuftgroupie 2 years ago
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I definitely have to order from the fragrance shop someday 💯
🏆
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Kalinka1973Kalinka1973 2 years ago
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He has enchanted me... Beautiful!
🙏🥰🤗
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Can777Can777 2 years ago
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Well done!
It's really beautiful too! 😇
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