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There’s no fire here.
A fine web of bright incense
wafts over buttery soft woods.
It leaves a sweet balm.
A fine web of bright incense
wafts over buttery soft woods.
It leaves a sweet balm.
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Danny264 2 months ago
Wonderfully written!
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NeonNoir 2 months ago
That usually works quite well. You can definitely do it. :-)
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Mrtangiers 2 months ago
Too bad, a bit more fire would have definitely done it good.
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Luwa 2 months ago
At least it's not too smoky.
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Gandix 2 months ago
But he doesn't make it onto your wish list.
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Cenno 2 months ago
..The topic "Infernal" misses the mark..
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Cfr 2 months ago
seems to be a lovely incense :)
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Floyd 2 months ago
Sure, sounds quite nice.
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Krapnek 2 months ago
It seems like you can do that sometimes.
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BillyBumbler 2 months ago
Sounds really lovely anyway 😍
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Rogaux 2 months ago
A millennial inferno, maybe? 🤔😉
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Seejungfrau 2 months ago
Still has charm.
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ElAttarine 2 months ago
Not so infernal.
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Theris 2 months ago
I like bright incense without the fire :D
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Brida 2 months ago
Sounds nice. The last line might be a bit too much for me, though.
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Sweetsmell75 2 months ago
Balm is good. ...!
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Bosworth 2 months ago
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It starts off quite lovely with fine incense, but it fades away too quickly.
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