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05/05/2023 - 12:31 AM
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Black Rain
Lets dark roses fall
On my leather shoes
Caught by chamomile blooms
I walk along the alley
On a musk morning
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35 Comments
ZerotoninZerotonin 2 years ago
If only it weren't for the roses...
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Lavendel18Lavendel18 2 years ago
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Beautifully written, but I'm out when there's too much leather...
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PinseltownPinseltown 2 years ago
1
Great description, how lovely...
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ExUserExUser 2 years ago
1
Renier just knows how to do it 馃槉
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BratuchaBratucha 2 years ago
1
Chamomile sounds interesting.
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SchatzSucherSchatzSucher 2 years ago
1
I don't know if that would be my avenue..
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SchalkerinSchalkerin 2 years ago
1
It depends on the little rose :-)
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Rieke2021Rieke2021 2 years ago
1
If the rose isn't too overpowering...
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DibellaDibella 2 years ago
1
That sounds beautiful and like a great interplay of fragrance notes!
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JonasP1JonasP1 2 years ago
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Sounds pretty good despite the rose.
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MarieposaMarieposa 2 years ago
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Oh yes, that's how roses should be :)
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Danny264Danny264 2 years ago
1
That definitely appeals to me.
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ErgoproxyErgoproxy 2 years ago
1
Hopefully, the shoes made it through unscathed. 馃槈
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SalvaSalva 2 years ago
Handmade leather shoes, nothing happens to them that quickly 馃槈
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K盲seK盲se 2 years ago
1
well described.
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PonticusPonticus 2 years ago
1
I could also take a liking to this composition!
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FloydFloyd 2 years ago
1
Interesting picture.
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FrauKirscheFrauKirsche 2 years ago
1
A beautiful picture! ...
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ViolettViolett 2 years ago
1
Definitely very interesting!
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ErgreifendErgreifend 2 years ago
1
Sounds very exciting!
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Eggi37Eggi37 2 years ago
1
Chamomile sounds different.
Finally, one that you like!
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SchoeibksrSchoeibksr 2 years ago
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The chamomile here piques my interest :)
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YataganYatagan 2 years ago
1
I really like chamomile.
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GandixGandix 2 years ago
1
Black Rain sounds wonderful. And then again, Rose...
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SalvaSalva 2 years ago
Your floral arch-nemesis ...
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JonezJonez 2 years ago
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The dark roses sound wonderful... I'm not opposed to it.
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SalvaSalva 2 years ago
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It has something special, set it aside if you like, but there are only 1-2 drops left.
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BillyBumblerBillyBumbler 2 years ago
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Sounds interesting and very beautiful, melancholic :)
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TherisTheris 2 years ago
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Well described, I like some of the things here.
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NuiWhakakoreNuiWhakakore 2 years ago
1
Sunshine wouldn't really be my thing 馃槈
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SalvaSalva 2 years ago
I think so too ... :)
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SmoetnSmoetn 2 years ago
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Sounds kind of nice...
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SalvaSalva 2 years ago
It has something special; I think the composition is impressive.
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Tony1106Tony1106 2 years ago
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Wonderfully described....
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SalvaSalva 2 years ago
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An extraordinary composition with rose, chamomile, leather, and clean musk fluff.
Fresh, rosy, and subtly leathery aura that I really like. Thanks to Tony 1106!
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