Axiomatic
02/04/2024 - 06:10 AM
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5Scent 9Longevity 9Sillage 9Bottle

The Greedy Moon

Look here, soon the hand will announce midnight.
Your familiar toys, your beautiful room, your world now sunk in silvery shimmer.

Long ago, in distant Chinese waters, a foolish junk set out in search of silver by night.
Greedy and blinded, its crew ignored warnings.
Too intoxicated by the promising juice of that lychee fruit.

In the Golden Dragon, that ill-reputed dive of fortune seekers, they heard tales of wealth and power.
Stories of ylang-ylang so close, ready to grasp.

Neither family nor friend could hold them back.
All the men shed not a tear when they were pierced at sea.

And clear was the night!

In the darkest firmament, in musky freshness, a glaring moon lured them.

Enchanting was its initial jasmine.
They all willingly raised their arms, reaching for it with insatiable hands.

But the floral face of a grimace faded!

Violet honey first tasted their lips, so that their will was broken.
Blinded by the crystalline kiss, they overlooked the glaring snares of the silver creature.

Fear crawled up their bones.
But their fate was sealed.
And only a helpless scream sank in the sea of hungry blossoms.

With the waning moon, the ghostly junk reached the home harbor.
Its wood discolored and coated with an inhospitable glaze.

Their loved ones searched for them.

But only sweet mooncakes with the seal did they find.

And so they avoid the sea on those nights of the moon that promised them much and took everything.

For that seal was never tasted and has been despised to this day.

So sleep well, my dears.
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53 Comments
ChristacitaChristacita 2 years ago
As always, a dream to read, and I will definitely sleep well in the silver lychee heaven 😍
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Medusa00Medusa00 2 years ago
Shivering! But I have snake breeding and glowing eyes against it, hissing.......
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SchalkerinSchalkerin 2 years ago
Great, now just a honey treat and then I hope for a good night's sleep. ;)
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Danny264Danny264 2 years ago
I wonder if I can still sleep well now :D?
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CfrCfr 2 years ago
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Wow, that sounds exciting!
But I'm a bit scared of getting a scent :)
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AxiomaticAxiomatic 2 years ago
Ahhhhhh, now it clicks!
😂😂😂
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CfrCfr 2 years ago
A little vampire from back in the day
aired as a series on ARD, I think in the early 90s 🤗
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AxiomaticAxiomatic 2 years ago
Who is Rüdiger??? Just curious... 🧐
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CfrCfr 2 years ago
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But definitely not from Rüdiger 🤣
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AxiomaticAxiomatic 2 years ago
Hopefully, you're still dreaming something beautiful... 🧛🏻‍♂️
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NuiWhakakoreNuiWhakakore 2 years ago
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Anyone who drinks lychee wine can't be helped; warnings won't do any good...
But as a fairy tale, I think it's quite nice!
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AxiomaticAxiomatic 2 years ago
That's the best way to fall asleep! 😂
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CoraKirschCoraKirsch 2 years ago
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Ugh, the name promised something more glorious and cooler 🫣
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AxiomaticAxiomatic 2 years ago
Yes, I was misled too...
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Tony1106Tony1106 2 years ago
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You described it just as I suspected: horror.
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AxiomaticAxiomatic 2 years ago
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That's exactly the scent. 👻
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GenovevaGenoveva 2 years ago
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I'm leaving the light on tonight...
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AxiomaticAxiomatic 2 years ago
Better this way… 👻
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SpatzlSpatzl 2 years ago
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Good thing I don't want to go to sleep yet. I don't want to have to dream this nightmare right now. You've found some powerful words. Ghostly trophy for you...
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AxiomaticAxiomatic 2 years ago
Thank you!
And sweet dreams!
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YataganYatagan 2 years ago
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Very nice, even though the scent is garbage. 😉
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AxiomaticAxiomatic 2 years ago
At least the scent brought out a spooky story from me.
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FloydFloyd 2 years ago
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So listen up, folks, and let me tell you... I'm getting my lantern ;-)
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AxiomaticAxiomatic 2 years ago
Hopefully, it won't shine silver!
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GschpusiGschpusi 2 years ago
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I'm swaying along with the silver waves.
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AxiomaticAxiomatic 2 years ago
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The ghostly sea… 👻
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PurpurherzPurpurherz 2 years ago
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Powerful and atmospherically rich. I feel the ecstasy at the beginning and the horror at the end. A fantastic description of an olfactory nightmare.
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AxiomaticAxiomatic 2 years ago
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Thank you!
I wish the scent had just stayed in the initial stage!
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ErgoproxyErgoproxy 2 years ago
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Uuuaahhh!👹👺👻☠️ The Scent, perfume of horror.
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AxiomaticAxiomatic 2 years ago
That'll get the little ones to bed!
👻
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DuftJunkieDuftJunkie 2 years ago
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Going to sleep now? Your description reminds me of John Carpenter's "The Fog" 😱.
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DuftJunkieDuftJunkie 2 years ago
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The movie definitely seems to be better 😀.
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AxiomaticAxiomatic 2 years ago
Well, maybe the scent is still clouding your mind...
It's definitely creepy sweet and synthetic!
👻
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Kalinka1973Kalinka1973 2 years ago
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I got chills reading this... Creepy trophy for you! 🏆
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AxiomaticAxiomatic 2 years ago
Thank you!
👻
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KovexKovex 2 years ago
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My teeth are sticking together. Yuck...
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AxiomaticAxiomatic 2 years ago
That's exactly how the scent is!
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Camey5000Camey5000 2 years ago
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The end of an odyssey.
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AxiomaticAxiomatic 2 years ago
Sealed with sweetness... 🥮
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DuftgroupieDuftgroupie 2 years ago
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Running away is appropriate 💯
But not from your review 🏆
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AxiomaticAxiomatic 2 years ago
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At least it's good for bedtime reading... 👻
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ElAttarineElAttarine 2 years ago
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Incredible! Greek verses for such a terrible scent - great idea.
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AxiomaticAxiomatic 2 years ago
Thank you! 🤓👻
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PollitaPollita 2 years ago
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Oh oh, sounds like tons of fake wood.
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PollitaPollita 2 years ago
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Yuck. Better not.
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AxiomaticAxiomatic 2 years ago
And a dose of maltol on top!
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KokusaiKokusai 2 years ago
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Nightmare is coming!
Imaginative, beautiful review!
Enjoyed reading it 🏆
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AxiomaticAxiomatic 2 years ago
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Thank you!
The scent has something eerie about it after all...
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TradescantiaTradescantia 2 years ago
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A strong warning.
I imagine it to be somewhat overloaded... fruity, heavy floral, and sweet all at once, without any bitter balance.
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TradescantiaTradescantia 2 years ago
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Okay, that's definitely a "flaw"; I don't like smelling cheap synthetic scents either.
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AxiomaticAxiomatic 2 years ago
Especially powerfully synthetic!
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SchoeibksrSchoeibksr 2 years ago
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What a nightmare of a bedtime story. Many empty promises dressed in gold, just like this fragrance! 😂😂😂
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AxiomaticAxiomatic 2 years ago
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If you apply the scent while reading aloud... 👻
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