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TristanKalus
09/21/2023 - 08:11 AM
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Life Tastes Good

Cracking, the crust of freshly candied apples breaks,
Caramel flows sugary, fruity over warm vanilla crescents.

The desserts are served for nibbling on a bed of sandalwood,
Creamy, dry, woody and paired with animalistic oud.

Originating in Laos, deeply woody, dark with a pleasant stable note,
Yet in no way stinky, a radiant presence wave after wave.

But then the bag of fizzy powder bursts and trickles down fine,
Sparkling, sweet and fruity it rushes and foams up and down.

Warm, delicate shimmer of vanilla turns into a sweet cloak,
Underneath, one can clearly hear the beaver's and civet's pawing.

After a good while, the fizzy powder no longer fizzes,
Only dry wood and caramel float in the sea of vanilla.

And so we drift along on our raft of oud,
Smoking fruity flavored tobacco, yes, life tastes good.

Fin.
Updated on 10/06/2023
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FloydFloyd 2 years ago
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I'm back with Flower ;-) Once again, I enjoyed following your verses, my dear!
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TristanKalusTristanKalus 2 years ago
Thank you so much, dear Floyd! :)
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FlirtyFlowerFlirtyFlower 2 years ago
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Now I've gained a kilo from reading 馃崕馃嵀馃崿 but it was fun to read. 馃弳
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TristanKalusTristanKalus 2 years ago
I'm very happy to hear that! :) I hope you enjoyed it. :D
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MarieposaMarieposa 2 years ago
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So this is what sweet life smells like?
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TristanKalusTristanKalus 2 years ago
I suspect so too ;)
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