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"Sittin' on the dock of the bay"
Sitting on a quay wall, a small fishing village, the Atlantic coast of France.
The sun is shining, the wind is blowing gently, the sea is crashing in gently bobbing waves against the stone wall below my dangling bare feet. Am a child again.
Sea breeze, salty aerosols wet my skin.
It smells of the sea, of shells, rock and seaweed.
I take a deep breath, stretch my face into the sun, take a walk.
Forget time, no burden, no confinement. Life is beautiful, freedom free.
"Sittin' on the dock of the bay, wastin' time" (Otis Redding)
The sun is shining, the wind is blowing gently, the sea is crashing in gently bobbing waves against the stone wall below my dangling bare feet. Am a child again.
Sea breeze, salty aerosols wet my skin.
It smells of the sea, of shells, rock and seaweed.
I take a deep breath, stretch my face into the sun, take a walk.
Forget time, no burden, no confinement. Life is beautiful, freedom free.
"Sittin' on the dock of the bay, wastin' time" (Otis Redding)
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Seta 2 years ago
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This awakens longings...
MonsieurTest 4 years ago
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Very suggestive with sparingly placed words praised :-))
Floyd 4 years ago
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Wonderful scenery! I enjoyed it.
Tofuwachtel 4 years ago
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"...go for a ride. ..." - What a wonderful way to put it Your words capture the fragrance beautifully!
Schrippe 4 years ago
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You did a great job describing this one in just a few words.....